Happy new year Newgrounds!
I finally submited my first flash animation!
The animation is not so very good, but I am quite new.
I hope you will enjoy it and feel free to comment.
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Very well! ^_^
Well, it's all pretty much good, with the exception of a few things. For starters, you need to up your frame-rate, to about 30 (usually around 33 with fight scenes). It'll make your tweens look smoother.
Your frame-by-frame was nice, better than I could do, but you need more of it. Looks like you got lazy at the moment with the lazer.
You could also try and shade the backgrounds and characters, whilst perhaps using some gradients. It'd have been nice to see more details on those planets, and some close-ups on your characters.
When you don't know what else to draw on your backgrounds/characters, just spend a few extra minutes detailing them more.
Some of the views of the characters seemed out of porportion too, like in the first shot of the two, their torsos were rather wide.
Anyway, good luck with your Flash, hope you submit some awesome stuff!
- Josh
Thank you very much for the constructive critism!
This will help my animations alot :D!
Also, I will always have a door open for ideas ;D.
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BenevolentSpartan
Would you like some constructive critiscm?
It was pretty awesome for a first Flash though, no lie!
Zyrix-Xela (Updated )
Thank you very much for the comment!
The movie (Red VS Blue - The battle) Is one of my first flash animations, but not the first.
I said it was the first flash animation that I have submited on Newgrounds.
And I would love constructive critiscm so my movies can be better :D!